I do not believe you have understood this task. You seem to have just copied several of the rules over without addressing them. In one section you do seem to begin addressing one of the rules, only to stop halfway and not finish the sentence! I also believe I requested that you remove it and re-upload it as text, as it is very difficult to read as a google document. Corey.
Shifau, I cannot see many improvements made on the basis of our detailed original comments! You have embedded some work on final ideas- but this is Hamerdeep's. However it is a shame that you have not addressed our other detailed comments or taken the opportunity to redraft. Vanessa
I do not believe you have understood this task. You seem to have just copied several of the rules over without addressing them. In one section you do seem to begin addressing one of the rules, only to stop halfway and not finish the sentence! I also believe I requested that you remove it and re-upload it as text, as it is very difficult to read as a google document. Corey.
ReplyDeleteShifau, I cannot see many improvements made on the basis of our detailed original comments! You have embedded some work on final ideas- but this is Hamerdeep's. However it is a shame that you have not addressed our other detailed comments or taken the opportunity to redraft. Vanessa
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